2. I wasn't able to complete my second elevator pitch and I have not received any feedback yet on my second idea napkin. My first elevator pitch didn't receive much criticism but rather excitement on the idea and support. I really appreciated all the great and positive feedback.
3. I decided to include in my second pitch what makes my product different and where it can be found.
This is such a neat idea! By presenting your product in the form of a story that the audience can relate to, it made a major impact and is very relatable. The part about the effects of drying loads over and over and how your product would basically eliminate this won me over! As far as how you can improve, during the speech you sounded a little nervous, perhaps you can rehearse your speech a few times in front of the mirror to calm your nerves? But don't worry you did an amazing job!
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TRUTH: best elevator pitch I've heard thus far.
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I connected with the story. I connected with the WHY behind the WHAT. I see the need for your product.
Okay now for some more truth: honeslty I wasn't paying too much attention bc I was watching a Deadmau5 live stream from Ultra in Miami and did NOT want to turn the volume down. He's been my favorite DJ since I got into the edm game.
But anyways, some feedback: have more confidence in your idea and your voice. you have something that I want. if I want it, i guarantee others want it as well.
Now for developing it, that's the hard part. I'd reach out to everyone you can find who does something similar and ask for as much help as you can. There's no way you can do it alone.
Good luck and please let me konw if there's anything we can do to help!
Preston
http://prestonkirkpatrick.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-3.html
This is a great idea and it is definitely relatable. Really, who hasn’t had that happen? My suggestion is about length. You ideally want an elevator pitch to be less than a minute and I think you’ve got some organic places to cut in the beginning. This *is* a thing that’s happened to nearly everyone, so you can shorten the narrative part in the intro and get to your hook and your idea a little faster.
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